OnCohesionAndCoherenceInCET-6Writing

OnCohesionAndCoherenceInCET-6Writing

李芸昆明学院公共外语教学部

【Abstract】ThispaperpresentssomemeditationsaboutCohesionandCoherenceinCET-6Writing.ItaimsathelpingcandidatestopasstheCET-6successfullyandachievegoodgrades.

【Keywords】cohesioncoherenceCET-6essaywriting

【中图分类号】G642【文献标识码】A【文章编号】1674-4810(2010)02-0049-02

COHESIONANDCOHERENCE

Nomatterwhetheratextispresentedthroughwritingorexpressedbyspeaking,bothofthemshouldbelogicalcohesionandsemanticcoherenceandthereisnoexceptioninessaywritingforCET-6.CohesionandcoherencearethemetafunctionofHalliday’sfunctionalgrammar,whichareapplicableandpracticable.(Halliday,2002)Whenwetalkaboutthetextcohesion,wecannothelpthinkingofcoherence.Indeed,coherenceandcohesionaretwodifferentconcepts.Generallyspeaking,accordingtoThompson,cohesionreferstothelinguisticdevicesbywhichthespeakerandwritercansignaltheexperientialandinterpersonalcoherenceofthetext,andthusatextphenomenon.Ontheotherhand,coherenceisinthemindofwriterandreader:itisamentalphenomenon.(1996/2000:7).Bymyacknowledgement,Ibelievethatcohesionisanetworkofatextwhichcanbeseenbutcoherenceisanentiremeaningofatextwhichcannotbeseen.Fromthispoint,atextrealizesitscoherencethroughcohesivedevices.

COHESIONANDCOHERENCEANDTEXT

‘Atexthastextureandthisisdistinguishesitfromsomethingthatisnotatext.’(Brown&Yule,1984:191)‘AtextureisprovidedbythecohesiveRELATION.’(Halliday&Hasan,1976:2)‘Cohesiverelationshipswithinatextaresetup‘wheretheINTERPRETATIONofsomeelementinthediscourseisdependentonthatofanother.’(Brown&Yule,1984:191)Inanotherwords,thetextureisprimarilyprovidedbycohesion,whichisasemanticconcept,whichreferstotherelationsofmeaningthatexistinthetext.Atext-cohesionoccurswheretheinterpretationofsomeelementinthediscourseisdependentonthatofother.‘TheonePRESUPPOSEStheother,inthesensethatitcannotbeeffectivelydecodedexceptbyrecoursetoit.’(Halliday&Hasan,1976:4)‘Sincethespeakerorwriterusescohesiontosignaltexture,thelistenerorreaderhastoreacttoitinordertointerpretit.’(Halliday&Hasan,1976:295)Ontheotherhand,coherenceholdssegmentsofatexttogether,makingitasalargesemanticbuilding,justasaworkmanusesbricksorstonestobuildabuilding.Theimportanceofcoherenceliesinthecontinuityitexpressesbetweenonepartofthetextandanother.(BrownandYule,1984:224)

COHESIVEDEVICES

Grammaticaldevice(cohesion),lexicalcohesion,logicalconnector,pragmaticandsemanticimplicationarefiveimportantcohesivedevices.GrammaticaldevicemayplayakeyroleincoheringsentencesandparagraphsinessaywritinginCET-6intoatext.AccordingtoHallidayandHasan’sCohesioninEnglish,andHalliday’sAnIntroductiontoFunctionalGrammar,thefollowingcanplayaroleascohesivetieinthetext-formingarereference,ellipsis,conjunction,timerelater,placerelater,substitution,timeandaspect.Inordertoexplicitthetwoconceptsofcoherenceandcohesion,IamgoingtotrytoanalyzethefollowingtwoparagraphsinessaywritinginCET-6byusingsomelinguisticknowledgewhichisrelevanttothetext-coherenceandtext-cohesion.

Sample1①

ModelTestFiveofwriting.

Writing:HowDoCollegeStudentsSpendTheirHoliday?

Paragraph2

①Thereareseveralreasonsleadingtothechanges.②Firstly,withthedevelopmentofeconomy,studentscangetfinancialsupportfortravelingfromtheirparentsaswellasbydoingpart-timejobs.

③Secondly,totourismhasdevelopedrapidlyoverthepasttenyears.④Thirdly,theconvenienceoftransportationmakesthetripeasierandquicker.⑤Finally,studentshaverealizedtheimportanceofparticipatinginsocialactivities.⑥Inthisway,⑦mostimportantofall,theycanobtainrichexperiencewhichcannotbelearnedfromtextbooks.

【Analyze】Inthisparagraph,①havesemanticrelationsofrepetitionwhichispresentedbyrepeatingthephrase,“severalreasonsleadingtothechanges”.②,③,④,⑤havesemanticrelationsoftimewhicharerealizedbycohesivewords,“firstly”,“secondly”“thirdly”and“finally”.①havesemanticrelationsofcomparativenessandemphasiswhichareexpressedbythecohesiveword,“Inthisway”andcohesivephrase,“mostimportantofall”.

Sample2②Writing:HowtoConductPatrioticEducationamongtheYouthofToday.Paragraph2

①Thepatrioticeducationcanmakeyouthmoreawareofthesignificanceofpatrioticeducationtooursociety,②however,canbeseenfromtheperspectivesasfollows.③Inthefirstplace,thepatrioticeducationcanmakeyouthmoreawareoftheglorioushistoryandcultureofournation,thusbuildinguptheirsenseofprideasChinese.④Inthesecond,thepatrioticeducationhelpsyouthvaluetoday’shard-earnedlife⑤soastoholdtheirgoldenchancesofenrichingthemselveswithknowledgeinpeace.⑥Tosumup,patrioticeducationisakeyingredientintheall-rounddevelopment.

【Analyze】Inthisparagraph,①,②havesemanticrelationsofrepetitionwhichispresentedbyrepeatingthephrase,“fromtheperspectivesasfollows”.③,④havesemanticrelationsoftimewhicharerealizedbycohesivewords,“infirstplace”,“insecondplace”⑤,⑥havesemanticrelationspurposeandresultwhichareexpressedbythecohesiveword,“soasto”andcohesivephrase,“Tosumup”.

Fromthetwoexamplesabove,wecanseethatthesemanticrelationwithinsentencesiscoherenceandtheformbywhichpresentsthesemanticcoherenceiscohesion.Therelationshipbetweencoherenceandcohesionisarelationofcontentandformseeingwhatkindofsemanticcontentswillhavewhatkindoftext-structure.Thereforeitisimportantforustostudytext-coherenceandtext-cohesionforustodevelopreadingtechniquesandreadingability.

COHESIONANDCOHERENCE

Writingisaformoflanguagecommunicationanditisathinkingactivity.Thereaders’understandingoftheword-meaninginthetextisthelowestlevelunderstandingofthetext.Ifthewriterhasnologicalabilitytostructurethesemanticrelationthatexistsinthewriting,he/shewillnotbeabletolettheteacherswhoarejudgingorreadingtheessayfollowthewriter’sthoughtandunderstandtdeeperstructureofthetext.SoifcandidateswanttowritesuccessfullyinthewritingofCETBand6,theywillhavenotonlyagoodcommandoflanguageknowledge(grammar,lexis)butalsotheknowledgeofcoherenceandcohesion.

Itiswellknownthateachwriterhashisintendedmeaninginproducingalinguisticmessageandeachessayorparagraphhasitscentralidea.Soacertaininternalrelationmustexistwithinparagraphsoftheessayandthisrelationmustbeembodiedinacertainform.Similarly,eachparagraphmusthaveamainidea(topicsentence)andeachsentencemustserveforthemainideaofeachparagraph.Theinternalrelationexistswithinsentences,whichmustbepresentedinacertainform.Thissemanticrelationbetweensentenceandsentence,paragraphandparagraphiscalledtext-coherenceandparagraph-coherence(thatImentionedinparagraphsabove)andthewaythisispresentedcalledcohesion.Sowhenweread,wecanreasonthelogicalrelationthatexistswithinsentences,andparagraphsbycohesivedevicesthatenableustounderstandnotonlytheword-meaningbutalsotheimplementationofthetext.

CONCLUSION

Inaword,itiswhencandidatesforCET-6haveagoodcommandoflanguageknowledge(grammar,lexis)andtheknowledgeofcoherenceandcohesionthattheywillbeabletowritewonderfulessaysandgetsatisfactorymarks.

注释

①大学英语六级考试星火模拟试卷(ModelTestFive),5~11

②大学英语四、六级写作全功略,135

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